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Many wise things you say here. Thanks. The major distinctions you make are particularly clear and helpful. Earlier this year, I started this little ditty below, with "awareness and humility" as anchors for the first line. With a few fresh edits tonight, the meaning turned a bit in the middle of the piece. Here it seems evident that the natural world will continue to give us stronger and stronger signals, so long as we follow the control and domination plan. Finally, the last word in the last stanza, was inspired by your piece. It seemed to fit...

Simple Guide For Becoming Yourself

Awareness and humility, they’re no longer optional,

as your awkwardness, grows fierce and unplanned.

An uncontrolled innocence is now deeply required.

Each stumble, your only way home,

this condition, of broken heartedness.

Now your north star must be fully trusted,

shining clear and bright, as you grow ever

closer to becoming whatever it is, whatever

it means to inhabit your true self. Surrender.

–Dale Biron

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